Answer by Alexander for Your character has something wrong with them, they...
Breaking character is okYour main character, and, in fact, any of the characters can break their character (no pun intended) - just not at any moment. There must be a crisis, strong enough to shake a...
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Internal Flaws should have External ConsequencesIf a flaw's only consequence happens when its too late to change anything (in your example, going insane and dying) there's no drama you can add that...
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The MC needs motivation greater than her tenacityOnce you get down the main points, we have her impending doom trying against her tenacity. Since impending doom isn't quite enough to make her give in,...
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I am a young author writing a fantasy series. In my story, my MC is strong, resilient, and always needs to look perfect on the outside. This is her biggest flaw, not telling the other characters about...
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